Monday, November 23, 2009

for a sweet shy summer December

from 13 to 23, we've come a long way
from school mates to soul mates, we've come a long way
from un-ringed to ringed, we've come a long way
from helen and troy to helen+troy, we've come a long way
from your mornings to my evenings, we've come a long way
from across the oceans, we've come a long way
from blue paper to entire diaries, we've come a long way
from letters to teddys to flowers to books, we've come a long way
from red jersey to green t-shirt, we've come a long way
from 'I' to 'us', we've come a long way
from 'us' to 'our', we've come a long way
from arundhati roy to you, we've come a long way
from *hugs* to long kisses, we've come a long way
from triplets to a thousand, we've come a long way
from Rosemary/Gabe to the last cowboy, we've come a long way
from strength to strength, we've come a long way
from 300 to 15, we've come a long way
from February to November, we've come a long way
from December to infinity, we'll go a long way...

4 comments:

  1. **hugs** love it for the feelings.

    i wish the "come the long way" refrain wasn't repeated in all the lines. Makes the poem a little tiring at times.

    but again i repeat...i love the feelings. and i wish you foreverness...always :)

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  2. It is a perfect awwwww poem... but i too agree with Vrinda... the refrain can be repeated but in a select few lines... But I like it :):) its just 15 days more...

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  3. aah.
    thank you both of you. and the 15 days flew by as did December and January.
    now i wait till it's 15 days again.
    sigh
    P.S will keep your comments in mind :)

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  4. it is a very 'firstlove'-ish poem. :)

    mwaaaahh

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